Some great stuff here but I’m not a huge fan of the parts at 0:07 and 0:52. They sound a bit weird idk.

Not bad but some of the melodies (especially around the drops) sound a bit weird. Also the initial riff is reused a few times throughout the song, which makes it feel quite repetitive. What you have is a decent start, but there is definitely a lot of room to improve :)

peak.